Oni No Noroi Page 25 - A Little Slip
kaminari on Nov. 15, 2006
This took a long time for me to do.. Sorry for the wait. Ive been preparing to move into a new apartment, studying and interviewing for a new job, and kinda cranky since I hadnt seen the man I love in nearly a month.
And the more I look at it, the more sloppy it feels =(
Weird smudges, ugly clouds (that I blame on my 7 year old laptop, once the file gets to be a certain size, the processor cant handle it so I have to tone down the effect.)
and awkwardly flowing panels.
Forgive me?
Also, for those of you just joining us who havent read the archive. This clumsy fellow is Gouzaa and he is training with the main character Akira, so its not an actual fight.
I really hope everyone will start to like Gouzaa. There will be some buddy-buddy bonding with him coming up.
of the spoiler box system
timlight at 9:08PM, March 12, 2007
amazing!
F_Allen at 1:51PM, Feb. 20, 2007
very modest la la la indeed sweetheart. nice comics :D
ZoeStead at 4:12AM, Jan. 12, 2007
Always great work!
Vendrus Sci at 11:18AM, Jan. 10, 2007
...And I thought I was slow to comment on Narou... XP Very good dynamic panels, especially the first four down the left. The foot-rock-slide panel is also luv, for water splash, angle and your ability to draw feet. I've just switched from a computer to a much newer laptop, and it is bliss - no more crashes and vanishing files. All the best with getting your new one!
ejb at 8:13AM, Nov. 23, 2006
Gouzaa so needs sandals with better traction. ...or those blocky wooden ones.
Freakeh at 11:27AM, Nov. 17, 2006
xDD Apparently he can't [move faster]. The clouds look fine to me and I can't see any smudges. The paner-order was perfectly understandable to! I hope the move goes well, and ooh I know what it feels to be unable to see a loved one. But you will see him eventually, and are you still able to contact him -some-how in the meantime?
insanelysane at 6:24PM, Nov. 16, 2006
XD owned. hahaha.
Rubygem at 3:43PM, Nov. 16, 2006
thehe he fell in the water!
kaminari at 2:54PM, Nov. 16, 2006
[spoiler="This is a test..."]of the spoiler box system[/spoiler]
Tantz_Aerine at 12:57PM, Nov. 16, 2006
Looks great :) And I have begun to be rather fond of Gouzaa
Nigellashade at 9:05AM, Nov. 16, 2006
I feel for you on your emotions about who you love.. and it can get awkward when moving to a new location.. The panels look very thought out, it look very fluent with the story-telling in these scenes. Kaminari your a wonderful artist, you create extreme detail in character concept, & Mastered background scenery's. You also capture great emotions, & added humor (when need be).. I'm so impressed with what you've created, each update hold a new surprise, and a sense of adventure put into the mix. Plus I like the way you make action scene, with the special effects in text..your a very well enhanced in your technique, as a Mastered Artist. Kaminari have a lovely week, & extra hugs to you.... ~M~ v~~~~v
Knuckles at 7:44AM, Nov. 16, 2006
lol
Daemon at 4:41AM, Nov. 16, 2006
Nah ha ha!It's not sloppy, it's wonderful! -beats with a fan- Your style is good, your colors are mezmerizing and the action is going smooth. -keeps hitting with the fan- there's nothing to forgive!
avsaroke at 4:15AM, Nov. 16, 2006
Awww... how embarassing.