Chapter 1: Page 01
Holly on Aug. 21, 2007
I am very proud of the work on this page. This is the first time I've drawn sans a scan of the original artwork. This comic exists mostly as a chance for me to improve not only my artwork, but also design and layout. I would love to hear your feedback.
TheMidge28 at 9:45AM, Aug. 22, 2007
nice first page...appears to be chained in a dark room...chilc is calling for her mom and the mom is the woman in chains...right? the last image I would enlarge to take up the bottom of the screen more and ovelap the panels to make the dynamic of the page more active...but great start!
floodgatemartyr at 12:40AM, Aug. 22, 2007
You have me intrigued, that's for sure. I think the layout is pretty good, depending on what you are going for. The amount of black space around the two boxes infers that she is in a large place. If that's not what you were going for, I would have made the black a little smaller. The art is great, and I like how your character is perched on the bottom of the page! Nicely done!