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Dips on Jan. 2, 2010
And because I'm such a bad girl, and didn't update last Monday, I'll upload another page. 8)
Dips on Jan. 2, 2010
And because I'm such a bad girl, and didn't update last Monday, I'll upload another page. 8)
Cameobug at 4:44PM, Jan. 3, 2010
I like the style and the story sounds like it might be really interesting. I have one suggestion for this particular page. Saying 'where champions were born' is a grammatical error because you are referring to a time(this peaceful time). Use 'when' in place of 'where' :)