Chapter One -- Page Twenty
Dani Russo on Sept. 10, 2007
Well..WOW.
I've said it already, but it bears repeating, thank you so much for the feature! I was left absolutely speechless yesterday when I logged on and saw the front page. (Though I am still amused at the catbutt thumbnail.)
Also, thank you for all of the feedback and kind words. I can only hope that you will stick with me for this adventure, and that I won't dissapoint you through all of this!
PS – http://pennycopper.com/forums/Upload/ If you are so inclined, visit the forums! It's a bit quiet there right now..liven it up! (It will be easily linkable soon, once I figure out how to customize my comic page here a bit!)
Starwolf at 6:55AM, Sept. 17, 2007
Congrats 0on the feature.... bookmarked.
antcomics at 12:25PM, Sept. 14, 2007
You deserved the feature! And LOL at the Catbutt...
blueliath at 12:23PM, Sept. 14, 2007
very interesting story so far, and your art is so professional. awesome :)
giovanni at 6:35PM, Sept. 12, 2007
now i understand, the third golem was contained in the pouch wich can contain more than it let appear
schorhr at 6:03PM, Sept. 12, 2007
Wow, great. Looks promising, another favorite of mine :-)
TheMidge28 at 10:31AM, Sept. 12, 2007
I have no idea how I keep missing updates...Thios page explains a bit more whatwas happening in the last page but as has already been addressed I am a bit confused. Maybe its confusing because as Penny's POV she wouldn't be able to make sense of it either but still its seems didfficult even with the dialogue on this page...its still confusing...probably like this comment...I could use a pq as well if you want to kind explain a little of what is going on... the art is top notch! and again congrats on the feature!
GreatScottComix at 9:30PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Im digging it. Congrats on the feature. Your deserving it. Scott out
joemeyer at 8:16PM, Sept. 11, 2007
It's all so... mysterious. I hope to Nicholas that you are now updating on a regular basis. :D
kavonn at 8:11PM, Sept. 11, 2007
...fav'd.
SoItBegins at 7:37PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Eeurgh.
Mina_Lunga at 6:50PM, Sept. 11, 2007
I, like cs3ink, am a bit confused. But I'm willing to wait and watch to see if it all makes sense. It reminds me of the contstraints that single-page updates have: we want to make each page interesting, but that can really screw with pacing and feeling. As you pointed out, imagine if many of the good manga were uploaded here - the page count before anything made sense would be staggering! Thanks for the reply, and I'm glad that you're aware of your need to skirt Foglio. He's great, but I want to see where YOUR characters are headed! Blondie's right arm has the elbow in the wrong place in the third panel, though. When curled, the forearm is long enough to cup the shoulder. And if it isn't all the way up, then the upper arm needs to be out at more of an angle. I think. Anyway, it just looks off to me, as though someone else is holding up his little magic baggy for him.
Milky at 6:23PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Oh, how beautiful.
Dani Russo at 4:05PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Don't apologize, cs3. You're being honest from your point of view! Let me PQ you, though. comments are a lousy place to try and sort/explain things out. :)
cs3ink at 4:00PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Dani, I'm sorry, but I'm still VERY lost. I simply can't grasp the connection between the panels. I don't understand how one progresses into the next. I don't might not understanding who the "girls" were, as I figure that will be revealed in time, but I don't understand who was holding what in their hand in the last panel of 2 pages ago, nor what is causing the liquid to rain in the last page or why the golem is covered in the viscous slime. I want to compehend, as I've really enjoyed the book up until the previous 3 pages. Sorry.
harryq at 3:57PM, Sept. 11, 2007
Well deserved.