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noelnohana on March 7, 2007
First page, hope you all like it. Or not, whatever
at 11:07AM, June 1, 2007
Laziness kinda sucks. All the time. 20 pgs in a year and a half. God damn myself. At least you made your girls hot. And the expressions be awesome. And his dream. Best dream ever. Even better than being a hobo behind a pizza shop.
at 8:44PM, March 27, 2007
hehee good plan~!
at 6:35PM, March 10, 2007
awsome mate ^_^
at 12:50AM, March 10, 2007
at 8:40AM, March 9, 2007
I think hell just froze over, cuz you finally got something up, but USE THE DAMN PROGRAMS I TOLD U ABOUT FOR UR PANELS DAMMIT.
~Mastachaos, Wayward Hearts and Timed Chaos~
at 8:49PM, March 8, 2007
I'll do better next time
at 8:28PM, March 8, 2007
naw it was more like laziness with the legs and yeah i wanted to put more for the second panel. plus rushing is not a strong point of mine
at 8:09PM, March 8, 2007
You should use your space a little better. I like how people use frames in different ways as an artistic thing, but your use feels a little more out of convienence. I'm assuming the girls in the third panel didn't have legs because you planned on cutting the panel there, but instead the bottom line of the frame cantered at an angle showing a great deal of space. And easy fix would have been to grab the girls and reposition them or change the bottom line's position.
Another thing that seems odd is the amount of white space in the second panel. Did you plan on putting more there?
And the last half of the page is just weird. It doesn't seem like it was planned out and rushed.
Oh well...just some constructive criticism.
at 6:18PM, March 8, 2007
who doesn't want to be a bandit