Pineapple an Riley 001
D6016 on March 9, 2009
i hated the Dialogue on the original first page.
i decided to take a role of Quality over Quantity.
PineApple and Riley
D6016 on March 9, 2009
i hated the Dialogue on the original first page.
i decided to take a role of Quality over Quantity.
omega5ooo at 4:04PM, March 22, 2009
Good decision. :) Honestly though, the art here is very, very nice. I love the monochromatic feel of the colouring. One thing though: You really should either make your speech bubbles bigger or the text smaller. I won't say more, there's a much better disection of this topic here: http://webcomictriage.blogspot.com/2007/08/text-triage-unit-no-2-illustrated.html Hope it helps!