Pinky TA 8: Page 16
Ozoneocean on Sept. 26, 2017
Page description:
So Ace comes back, and gets a job as test pilot on a tromper, Cc gets in with the crew working on the land ship, and Piny chats with Betty and Colin (or Colon? I don't even know anymore…), about the progress that's happened.
Commentary:
I loved doing the detail and shading effects here, but I can't help but think the balance of the page is off… while the dialogue and pacing seems a bit awkward. I don't know to be honest. I've been working on the page for so long I can't look at it with any sort of balance or objectivity anymore and I just wanted to finish it!
The golden rule is NOT to criticise your own work because it down-sells it and makes it look worse to people; beginner artists do that a lot because they don't know any better and they're often humbly fishing for compliments…
But I don't care at this stage. Something has gone wrong here and I'm not sure what.
Ozoneocean at 9:14PM, Sept. 26, 2017
Hahaha! Nice call back to the recent Quackcast 341! ^_^
Tantz_Aerine at 11:01AM, Sept. 26, 2017
Excellent detail! I really like the shading. I don't think there's anything wrong.
Ozoneocean at 9:15PM, Sept. 26, 2017
Thankyou! Maybe it was just the late night. Something seemed totally "off" to me...
KimLuster at 10:55AM, Sept. 26, 2017
Love the detail on the page! The clothing folds, and that Tank-thing in the middle of page (seems like I've seen something very similar to that in some story... Hrrmmm)
Ozoneocean at 9:17PM, Sept. 26, 2017
Haha! Yes, Pit has a giant tank as well... not quite as huge as this one though. The folds are the funnest part to paint in. I love doing detail like that.