Page 20: The battle rages on!
xaxelx on Nov. 20, 2009
Yea, and I'm REALLY damn late with this update, thanks to m'sister, parents, brother, etc.
But at least it's here, right…? I've been doing a bunch of testing with specific things as well, which made this page longer to finish. It's not very actiony right now, but I'll be getting to making it that way soon…
Criticism would be very appreciated!
Oh, and please – please don't mention how poorly I did panel 2…
xaxelx at 10:19AM, Nov. 28, 2009
@ex: Thanks! :D @xVegitox: What do you mean? Like, they crowd the page too much or... the way I made them? o_o'
xVegitox at 9:59AM, Nov. 28, 2009
This is great! The speech bubbles are too messy, thats the only problem. Force palm looks epic.
exxxtasy69 at 9:38PM, Nov. 25, 2009
WOW!! COOL PAGE, axel!! You've really done a great job with this one!! Cant wait to see more!! btw, 1st!! ;D