Well, its an alright start, but heres what you could improve on:
Spellcheck your work by running it through Word or another program that offers spellcheck to ensure your spelling, punctuation, etc, is right. That way you won't have any typos, unlike here. Also, avoid abbreviations and stuff like 'plz'.
Good luck to you in the future~
onyx801 at 5:43PM, Jan. 30, 2010
whops misspelled future.
onyx801 at 5:42PM, Jan. 30, 2010
Thnks for tip I'll keept that in mind in the futer.
Sleeping Terror at 1:29PM, Jan. 30, 2010
Well, its an alright start, but heres what you could improve on: Spellcheck your work by running it through Word or another program that offers spellcheck to ensure your spelling, punctuation, etc, is right. That way you won't have any typos, unlike here. Also, avoid abbreviations and stuff like 'plz'. Good luck to you in the future~