This pretty good for a beginner. Just to keep you movitaved, I'm fav'ing this, and I'll keep my eye on it.
Just some tips...
1. Keep the text bubble tails just a bit slimmer, and not on the edge of the bubble itself.
2. Use the text bubbles you used from panels 3 and after, those are the best recommended.
All I can really offer. But yea, overall, great.
HikariLi at 2:34PM, Jan. 14, 2009
Thank you ^^;
DARKNES at 1:00PM, Jan. 14, 2009
This looks really good so far
HikariLi at 2:04PM, Jan. 13, 2009
Uhm, Thanks.. xD;;;
xaxelx at 1:39PM, Jan. 13, 2009
This pretty good for a beginner. Just to keep you movitaved, I'm fav'ing this, and I'll keep my eye on it. Just some tips... 1. Keep the text bubble tails just a bit slimmer, and not on the edge of the bubble itself. 2. Use the text bubbles you used from panels 3 and after, those are the best recommended. All I can really offer. But yea, overall, great.