Jaden#16
Sonku on July 29, 2007
Sorry i havent updated in a LONG time ive been gone and ive been playing pokemon shiny gold but here's an apdate and im back on schedule and im going to continue the comic i dont care if some people complain juss as long as the people who like it still read it
BohemianBear at 8:09PM, Oct. 10, 2008
Edit: Disregard my last comic, I don't know why your on the front page since this was posted LAST YEAR. My bad.
BohemianBear at 8:04PM, Oct. 10, 2008
Okay- I like to help out new people and here is some contructive critism A Goodstart- BUT! For one- Lets try and be alittle realistic here, I mean the only wild pokemon I can remember that ever- EVER liked humans right off at the start was Mew. And at the same time, most pokemon are trained are kept inside pokeballs The only exception that I agree with is Pikachu and Meowth- THATS RIGHT :D Also- For the love of whatever creator you worship- (Me- its science!) MS Paint is just a lame comic tool- I mean, if it works for you, thats cool, but please PLEASE work to make it look a whole lot better- cause it is possible- Like- Remove the black background- infact- Never use black in backgrounds- Set up Guidelines you can use to seperate your panels- And make sure your panels are IN LINE unless its a Dynamic panel or something crazy like that. Okay- Now- Lets get some Character Development going- Why did this Growlth choose Jaden to follow around? Why did he help break up those pokemon from earlier? Why all of a sudden does he listen to humans. When you've been told slow down- try and come up with a better story than just remaking your game from pokemon red in MS paint. What am I saying- Pokemon Red had more character development than this comic- No Offense Also- You can find cheap Photoshop programs at any computer store- I'd suggest investing like 100 bucks in adobe photoshop and learn to use it to make your comics look twenty times better- If you need an example- I kindly plug my own comic to you and show you what about two weeks of fiddling with adobe photoshop and reading tutorials will help you accomplish :) We all have to start somewhere and so far you've shown that you can atleast put sprites in place and type on your keyboard. so lets build on that! I hope you've learned something from this- please take it with a grain of salt- Your comic isn't that great- but it could be!! Just work n it- Okay?
TBustah at 10:39PM, Aug. 25, 2008
Pretty hard to like it PERIOD. You've been gone over a year, and you still haven't improved. I'm sorry if I'm coming across as mean here, but this needs a lot of work. And boosting your ego when it's undeserved is just going to make things worse. Please don't take this the wrong way. I know what it's like to be the new guy. Hell, my early work was even WORSE than this! But I never would have improved unless the more experienced spriters on here told me what I was doing wrong, and pointed me in the right direction. And I'm still trying to improve, because I can see what I'm still doing wrong, and because I like to think that we all have room for improvement. I think your main problem is that you aren't taking pride in your work. You just seem to be rushed. Slow it down. Correct your mistakes before you post a page. Other than that, you should check your other pages for the bits of advice I've left. I'd also recommend that you study other comics on the site, and try to adapt their techniques to your own pages. Good Luck.
Poke Alster at 10:57AM, Oct. 17, 2007
pretty hard to like it when it never updates