001 Uncle Billy
Kris1 on Sept. 1, 2010
Uncle Billy is a respected Pokemon master. I'm worried I'm going to get my a*s handed to me!
Kris1 on Sept. 1, 2010
Uncle Billy is a respected Pokemon master. I'm worried I'm going to get my a*s handed to me!
Dark Ninja at 10:45AM, Sept. 3, 2010
It looks good dude. I see others are telling you ways to make it better, but be careful not to work to hard to please everyone or else the comic making wont be fun any more
charliemew2 at 8:27PM, Sept. 2, 2010
huh better then most noobs on this site...Pretty good, but don't bitmix and don't make the characters heads red like that. just recolor their eyes.
PKNESS at 7:56PM, Sept. 2, 2010
Uh, I hate to be the mean guy, but here I go. First off, your doing way better than most newbies, but you still have some mistakes I'd like to point out. 1. Kris's hair and body is a bad recolor, you need to find the lightest shade of yellow you have, and go darker and darker until the hair looks okay to you. 2. What's up with the last panel? Is Kris mad or something? Or is he embarassed? You gotta make the characters express themselves more. 3. And if your gonna do those kinda sprites from Diamond and Pearl and Platinum, you can't use the map sprites from Ruby, Sapphire and Emerald. That is called BITMIXING. So work on those and we'll work on from there.
Ettie at 7:44PM, Sept. 2, 2010
It's looking good so far. I like the chat bubble style.