When the blond guy starts talking you should have made his font a different color than the narrator.
Its not too bad but cut down on the empty space. A lot of it is unneccessary.
dont use so much outlined text! Speech bubbles when characters are talking. and the green doesnt look good with the red bg, id say use either a bluish background OR white text.
king101 at 4:29AM, Oct. 12, 2010
i wasn't going to keep them. And thanks.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 3:45PM, Oct. 10, 2010
You have improved alot, I will admit. But one thing that annoys me is the mouth/expressions. Work on that.
locoroco1 at 4:13PM, Oct. 1, 2010
Cool.
king101 at 2:02PM, Oct. 1, 2010
Thanks for all the comments and advice. I will be make the changes in the next issue. (:
xVegitox at 1:16PM, Oct. 1, 2010
When the blond guy starts talking you should have made his font a different color than the narrator. Its not too bad but cut down on the empty space. A lot of it is unneccessary.
Snowninja at 9:52AM, Oct. 1, 2010
Wow! Your skills have really improved! (*Clapping*)
Lexxorodius at 5:19AM, Oct. 1, 2010
dont use so much outlined text! Speech bubbles when characters are talking. and the green doesnt look good with the red bg, id say use either a bluish background OR white text.
Jayden2305 at 11:29PM, Sept. 30, 2010
nice