#02
selkielili on Oct. 24, 2010
Hope you guys like this page, I'm only gonna be putting up one page per update day now, so tomorrow will be Pokemon Quest Adventures.
Also, just let you know, I redone the cover of Pokemon runaway and it's up now so tell me what you guys think of it and if you think I should change it anymore~
EDIT: decided to redo the page, thankyou to XM0stLyGhOstLyX for the advice I hope it looks a bit better now. Also thankyou to anyone else who's given me advice on some of the pages of my comic, it really helps. If you ever have any more advice for me I'm listening. Also I might go back and redo the other pages I have up so far to make them better I'll be doing that today and possibly tomorrow if I don't have time today.
EDITEDIT: changed the last panel for a bit more effect ^^;
xVegitox at 1:10PM, Oct. 25, 2010
Since you know how to resize your sprites, how about zooming in on things for emphasis. Something like panel 4 could have been zoomed it more to add a dramatic effect to the yelling.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 9:31AM, Oct. 25, 2010
So I was going to go total troll on you, but you seem normal, so I'll be nice. The grammar is almost prefect, but never start a sentence with "And" I have no problem with the recolors, because your new. But I would get working a custom. The paneling is a little... Odd, and I am a bit confused about the second panel... Don't just plop a building down and call it a panel, because it confused my dumbass. Other then that, prefect, very good for a n00b.