There are so many things wrong here, I don't even know where to start...
So I won't. Clearly, you need to study other comics more and learn to use Paint better. You should also get paint.net or Photoshop, and use it to do your text and balloons.
alright, try not to make the panels so big, and the shirt on the red haired guy is kinda bad, try recoloring that. and just use pokemon mystery dungeon sprites, cuz those ones are not very great. If you need any help, just PQ me or check out my comic.
Rapter at 6:58PM, May 18, 2010
This comic is dead. Please don't leave comments. I've restarted this comic here. http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Shadow_versus_Dark/
TBustah at 9:59PM, March 31, 2010
There are so many things wrong here, I don't even know where to start... So I won't. Clearly, you need to study other comics more and learn to use Paint better. You should also get paint.net or Photoshop, and use it to do your text and balloons.
Rapter at 1:40PM, Nov. 13, 2009
Yeah, I'm still working on this comic, I just have other plans I need to work on.
Brawllucas at 4:26PM, Oct. 28, 2009
hey dude, are u coming back?
DarkSpark at 9:09AM, Oct. 2, 2009
by that i mean never mix overwolrd DS sprites with GBA sprites
DarkSpark at 7:07PM, Oct. 1, 2009
ok u shud re-size sprites by numbers ending with 00 like 100%, 200% and so on,n i agree with brawllucas u shud NEVER mix DS sprites with GBA sprites
Brawllucas at 6:54PM, Oct. 1, 2009
alright, try not to make the panels so big, and the shirt on the red haired guy is kinda bad, try recoloring that. and just use pokemon mystery dungeon sprites, cuz those ones are not very great. If you need any help, just PQ me or check out my comic.
PKNESS at 6:50PM, Oct. 1, 2009
Dude this comic is cool, but u should space out the boxes a little. Other than that, great job! Love the avatar too!