Ohey, it's you! :D It's me, JoFro, from SJ. I'm pretty surprised that you're on here, but lemme warn you:
People here on DD are WAY more criticize-giving than the people are on SJ. But don't worry, they only crit harshly because they want you to get better. For example, I'm going to crit you right now.
The words for Chapter 1 looks bland. I mean, it doesn't look exciting. Go to dafont.com and find some fonts that'll show the PIZAZZ outta your comic, y'know?
You also need to pick one type of Pokemon you're gonna use; either PMD(the red Corsola and the Gible), or the Pokemon front sprite, which you used for Grotle. In this one, I would've used the front sprites for Corsola AND Gible.
Ummmmm....I think that's it for now. Keep on practicin'.
(Btw, pimpin' sprites.)
JasonMakuto at 8:23AM, Feb. 25, 2011
thanx Jo I'll remember!
Brawllucas at 7:19AM, Feb. 25, 2011
Ohey, it's you! :D It's me, JoFro, from SJ. I'm pretty surprised that you're on here, but lemme warn you: People here on DD are WAY more criticize-giving than the people are on SJ. But don't worry, they only crit harshly because they want you to get better. For example, I'm going to crit you right now. The words for Chapter 1 looks bland. I mean, it doesn't look exciting. Go to dafont.com and find some fonts that'll show the PIZAZZ outta your comic, y'know? You also need to pick one type of Pokemon you're gonna use; either PMD(the red Corsola and the Gible), or the Pokemon front sprite, which you used for Grotle. In this one, I would've used the front sprites for Corsola AND Gible. Ummmmm....I think that's it for now. Keep on practicin'. (Btw, pimpin' sprites.)