.18--Liability
Ruka E Pocky on March 19, 2007
This I bring you is a short one-shot I did for the Tokyopop contest. I lost. :3
So here, take a look.
I'd love some feedback/attentions.
This is my favorite page for some reason. Maybe it's the eye! Yes, THAT eye.
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DJLink at 11:57AM, March 20, 2007
Man im sorry you lost but then again the compatition is feirce from what I hear......just how do you submit your work to tokyopop anyway?
theorah at 10:28AM, March 20, 2007
You know what, Ive just read it all the way through so far...and I really cant see whats wrong with this comic... Better then some of the winning entrys I think! The panelling is good, there are lots of interesting dynamic angles, the story is personal, emotional and interesting, the character designs are good, you can tell whats going on....One thing I would maybe change is some of the speech, but that is a minor detail. But really, cant see anything that would make this not be chosen amongst those other entrys. You know what? This kind of annoys me, but maybe its the fcat that you have an ORIGINAL style of drawing, that your comic isnt a COMEDY and isnt MEDIOCER that made it not make it to the final winning entrys? What you think? X( Maybe theres something I'm missing, but its something sad to consider, TP may not consider creativity as much as money into their chosen entrys....if it is so, try your hardest to break past mediocrity and make something both so original and amazing that could win!
theorah at 10:11AM, March 20, 2007
lovely well paced, spaced out and imaginative panel layout...I'm not actually quite sure why this could of lost...so far I'm actually liking it more then some of the winning entrys. 0_o
Priest_Revan at 6:42AM, March 20, 2007
Awesome.
Friedenmann at 12:40AM, March 20, 2007
The eyes is awesome. I don't know why, but I think of Gottesfaktor when I browse through...
slimredninja at 11:02PM, March 19, 2007
sweet great looking page