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rhino577 on Sept. 24, 2008
I think the ink work looks a hell of a lot better on this page. Oh and tell signz if you're enjoying the story…Cause he's the writer.
rhino577 on Sept. 24, 2008
I think the ink work looks a hell of a lot better on this page. Oh and tell signz if you're enjoying the story…Cause he's the writer.
dragonrider at 5:43PM, Sept. 25, 2008
Have to agree with DAJB, if your character uses the F word all the time it looses its impact when you want to knock people on the floor with it. Many people tend to skip stories that over use swearing because they get tired of reading it all the time. Art and plot line super
rhino577 at 10:26AM, Sept. 25, 2008
As for the expletives, I'll have to take most of the blame for those. When working out some of the details of the story, I asked for a very Quentin Tarantino type script.
kingofsnake at 9:19AM, Sept. 25, 2008
I disagree with DAJB, I think the f-bomb on this page works, but the one on page one seemed unnessecary. So... he picks up rats?... Oh! Or does he STEAL rats
DAJB at 12:16AM, Sept. 25, 2008
Writing-wise, I'd recommend you cut back on the expletives for low-key scenes like this. Nothing wrong with using them but, if your character uses them all the time, they have no impact when you need them to. Just a thought. Artwork is cool. Obviously.