whoa, at first I got surprised because I thought it would be another KH sprite comic (theres tons of 'em here in DD lol) this is looking cool in every page, keep it up!
God damn- my comment got
cut offf! As I was saying-
the art and story look awesome-
it makes me want to finish playing the game
o__x;;
Going to meh faves!
Since I've never been a fan on commenting on pages an author will never go back and visit, I'll just post this on your most recent entry.
In page one, your "girl" looks strongly like a guy. Strongly. No facial features point otherwise. Her body is a female's body, but to have a well-put-together character you need everything to point to what that character is.
Also, I'm critiquing your spelling, as an ion (eye-on) is an atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons, while an eon is more what you were going for (An indefinitely long period of time; an age.).
I cannot stress enough punctuation and grammar in comics. It is the most important thing you will ever face. We are reading these things, and I expect to read them correctly.
the evil person at 9:57AM, March 3, 2009
awesome! can't wait to read it!
Darkmax at 2:08PM, Oct. 29, 2006
Whoa just found I'm in....
makisstyle at 10:19AM, June 21, 2006
kool!
Icefox101 at 7:35AM, June 21, 2006
This is really good!
Lil player at 4:32AM, June 15, 2006
I luv it
end_game at 9:06AM, May 21, 2006
does this have anything to do with that secret ending, plz say no
jxknight at 4:05AM, May 19, 2006
whoa, at first I got surprised because I thought it would be another KH sprite comic (theres tons of 'em here in DD lol) this is looking cool in every page, keep it up!
Tomcat at 4:26PM, May 18, 2006
Wait is that Riku? It's Riku right?....right? And if they let the XIII Order live then...o.0 HIDE YOUR EGGS XEMNAS LIVES!!!
Pensuke at 1:07PM, May 17, 2006
Eh.. thats really great! *sigh* I still havent played KH2 because it isnt even released her.. T_T but really really great drawing!
end_game at 3:29PM, May 16, 2006
lately i've seen alot of KH comics around, oh well, AWESOME DRAWING
mimiche at 5:17PM, May 15, 2006
God damn- my comment got cut offf! As I was saying- the art and story look awesome- it makes me want to finish playing the game o__x;; Going to meh faves!
mimiche at 5:11PM, May 15, 2006
OMG!! kingdom hearts
CORY at 12:22PM, May 15, 2006
Since I've never been a fan on commenting on pages an author will never go back and visit, I'll just post this on your most recent entry. In page one, your "girl" looks strongly like a guy. Strongly. No facial features point otherwise. Her body is a female's body, but to have a well-put-together character you need everything to point to what that character is. Also, I'm critiquing your spelling, as an ion (eye-on) is an atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons, while an eon is more what you were going for (An indefinitely long period of time; an age.). I cannot stress enough punctuation and grammar in comics. It is the most important thing you will ever face. We are reading these things, and I expect to read them correctly.
RoronoaZoro at 5:51AM, May 15, 2006
This is a sweet comic
dmc87 at 5:20AM, May 15, 2006
Sorry, forgot to rate. Love it!
dmc87 at 5:19AM, May 15, 2006
Demyx!
Aussie_kid at 3:10AM, May 15, 2006
Nice. So is this set after KH2? Because I haven't played it, only the first and COM (KH2 hasn't come down here yet)
kodos at 6:53PM, May 14, 2006
this looks like a good comic nice art good Narration can't wait to see the story unfoild