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roguemanga on Jan. 15, 2009
Ahem yeah I've been working on this all night and really wanted to get it done. Enjoy!! Inspiration came from ddr songs XD
roguemanga on Jan. 15, 2009
Ahem yeah I've been working on this all night and really wanted to get it done. Enjoy!! Inspiration came from ddr songs XD
draconia11 at 5:55AM, Jan. 19, 2009
the guy reminds me of someone from Bleach...great flow on the page too!! and good job drawing the clothing.
tiffawolf at 9:45PM, Jan. 17, 2009
"omg" hahahaah so great,u can tell she stays on pc too much like us XD
littlerain at 9:28PM, Jan. 17, 2009
Yeah I am also getting a feeling of Tite Kubo from your art. Not a bad thing at all because I absolutely adore him! I can't wait for more of your comic.
The Derkomai at 7:20PM, Jan. 17, 2009
Ahhh, you've tricked me into reading your comic, damn you! Oh well... I like it :D Will watch. Clothing is a bitch to figure out how it flows on a person. I love doing clothing, so I know the pain of figuring it out. That said, you're doing a pretty good job. Page layout (where the panels are placed, and how) is something I've personally been trying to tackle now, and it's by far a fair battle to fight. You've done some good golden ratio here, one of the key ingredients to a pretty page. The white space under then 1st, 2nd, 4th and last panel disturbs me a bit however. Perhaps an overlap of the top panels over the 5th panel would solve some of it for future action pages? I might also make the page number smaller and to the side, since it feels like you've slanted the bottom half of the last panel for its sake--when we, as online readers, really don't need a page number. It adds to the overall professional feel of the comic, for sure, but it might be making your panels suffer, and thereby your story. Yes...I look into this stuff a little far... Hope I'm helpful rather then annoying ^__^v On a last note, your characters are beautiful in their close ups. I'm intrigued. Comics onwards!
HyenaHell at 1:59PM, Jan. 16, 2009
Wow, looks like you've put a lot of time into this! I really enjoy the art; Great motion, and nice sense of composition on your page, too. Keep up the good work!
Ryunohime at 8:18AM, Jan. 16, 2009
Oh dear.... nice panel layout, you really get a sense of the motion in this page. ^_^
harkovast at 6:36AM, Jan. 16, 2009
Yikes, that was a bit unexpected.
ShinuZero at 5:17AM, Jan. 16, 2009
Awesome! Last panel is great! The style kind of reminds me of Kubo-san. :]