#1 Page 4
daniel_the_drummer on July 27, 2007
I'm trying my best. I need to spend more time on the artwork. Please, let me know what you think.
This is page 4 of 4 of this update
Dan.
P.S. I plan to update a scene a week. Every wednesday.
P.P.S. I know not much is going on here, but trust me the plot will thicken, quickly. This is just to act like a prologue type thing.
WTHecksicle at 7:11PM, Nov. 29, 2008
Cool
warefish at 1:41AM, Sept. 10, 2008
F***ing awesome, dude!
kal23 at 5:36PM, July 28, 2008
i like it so cool
DA Burley at 12:37PM, Feb. 21, 2008
I saw this on the random thing on the front page and damn I wish you'd update this thing
F_Allen at 7:45PM, Oct. 12, 2007
cool
hrist at 8:03AM, Aug. 14, 2007
I like your comics! : D MOREEEEEE
Allan at 1:06AM, Aug. 8, 2007
WHAT THE HELL! I never commented on this?! Well, here I go anyway. 1. Style: I dig the style. I love the guy in the suit. He is one of the coolest and best-drawn suit guys I've seen in a long time. 2. Color: I like the color, but am not as thrilled with it as the art. I don't like the use of gradients so openly. 3. Lines: Your lines could be darker. They seem like they're just scanned in pencil with no tuning. You should tune them and make them darker. 4. Other stuff: a lot of people have a hard time drawing background things to make their backgrounds seem interesting and busy. You're borderline, here (here being all 4 pages). I suggest looking at some actual cityscapes while drawing your backgrounds and taking little details you see in the pictures and put them in your art. It will help, trust me. In total you still get a 5, because I still like this and want to see where it will go. Get up the next page soon!
doomedd44 at 12:25AM, Aug. 6, 2007
interesting,,,
Werewolf Accountant at 12:41PM, Aug. 5, 2007
its looking good dan, noel and julian would be proud......
timlight at 1:43AM, Aug. 4, 2007
to be continued... ^^
tweebus at 4:25PM, July 31, 2007
Rule #1. Never crawl into a dark hole!
FAL at 3:19PM, July 30, 2007
Yay, very original style. Cool opening, very intriguing indeed...
matteblack at 10:12AM, July 30, 2007
Great style...looking forward to finding out what's going on!
djeffcoate at 8:32AM, July 30, 2007
Lush...simple as that.
lyron at 11:34PM, July 28, 2007
I like the character art. It kind of reminds me of the style a lot of french artists had in european comics I used to read when I was younger.
Talekyn at 4:13PM, July 28, 2007
Well, that's what you get for trying to escape a monster by climbing down into a sewer, I guess. Nice camera angles on this one, and nice pull back on the distance and fade to black.
Miss Envy at 2:53PM, July 28, 2007
Oooh, freaky. :D
Fysh at 10:38AM, July 28, 2007
Ah, this comic is awesome! I love your art style, and I really want to know what happened to the guy.
D0m at 9:57AM, July 28, 2007
Wonder what happened... I love the comic so far. I wasn't expecting your art to be so unique and crisp.
Bekefel at 9:20AM, July 28, 2007
I just want to know what the hell is coming after that guy! Maybe it's his mother with a christmas sweater! ... ARRRRRRRRRRGGGH! ... Bad memories of raindeer sweaters.
cs3ink at 8:59AM, July 28, 2007
Nice start.
I heart artists at 8:45AM, July 28, 2007
This is scaring me!
dueeast at 8:07AM, July 28, 2007
This is definitely a "not good" moment for the dude who to tried to escape down the manhole. :)