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ash_nt on Sept. 27, 2007
at 1:33AM, July 15, 2009
I think that the story is great and very original :) The art could be a bit better, but it doesn't take away from the story, if you know what I mean. I think that with a little more practice on perspective and stuff your comics could be amazing :D
at 2:31PM, Dec. 10, 2007
Well, I didn't even make it as a runner up, but I guess it was kinda expected. All of the winners are amazing, and no doubt at a publishable quality. I'm still developing and nowhere near that level. As much as I love doing this, sadly I don't know if I'll be able to anymore cos of university workload and then next year actually having to get a real job. sigh
at 4:59PM, Oct. 25, 2007
Please continue DD:
at 5:50AM, Sept. 29, 2007
Thanks very much for the feedback guys, much appreciated. I'm working hard on perspectives and foreshadowing.
at 6:10PM, Sept. 28, 2007
A really lovely story with some genuinely sad and sweet moments. I really enjoyed the character development too. Art wise I think it would be a good idea to practice perspective of the human body. I used to have major problems with this but there are some good tutorials on the net and drawing from life may help too. Thanks for posting this great piece and good luck in the competition!
at 4:28AM, Sept. 28, 2007
a well written story. it deserves a 5. =)