2 - Steph
Reine on March 9, 2008
So begins the first story which takes place around young Steph here.
Considering I was worried about how the bubbles would turn out, I'm reasonably please, however in future I think I'll outline them. And not be an idiot and use black on a dark background, I should of used grey or something so the text was still visable. I'm a lover of dark bubbles with white text. :3
Scince this is my first proper comic in Paint.net, please be picky and give me full, honest criticism. I would really appreciate it to know what to improve on in future (other than the bubbles as I'm aware they need improving, however online tutorials are remedying this XD).
Keep on smilin'! ^_^
GAH! I screwed up the thumbnail of the comic. Now it won't show up at all. T_T
poonipoonz at 5:18PM, March 10, 2008
Okay...Here's my criticism: 1) the balloons are bad, but you already know that. :) Don't add color to the balloons, leave it white, and just change the text's color if you want. That way you can notice the balloons, even on a dark background. 2) in paint.net, the text can sometimes look a bit, how should i say this...? A bit distorted. Make sure you make the text a bit bigger in paint.net, that way it won't look pixelated. -other than that, it's slowly coming along. :D