This has been on the list of "Comics that need Comments" on the front page for a while. I was curious, so I came here, and now I feel really bad. It would seem you have about 30 pages...and nobody's EVER commented on ANY of them? Sorry, I should've came here sooner!
However, you cannot completely blame them, for there are reasons I'm sure people didn't come here even after seeing it on that list. Why? Because it's a Smash Bros-like tournament comic. And everybody hates them. A lot. Why? Because not only do they lack story, character development, etc., but they're usually done horribly, and they're very cliche. Everybody's doing them, and none of them are good. That's pretty much your main problem, now...
-You're mixing bittages/styles a tiny bit, but not as much as most people so you're doing pretty good.
-The effects could use work.
-Your matchs end way too quickly, and aren't very detailed.
-Your fights lack sound effects, and even the occasional scream or grunt would work too.
-Be sure to use text bubbles. You used one on this page, which is good, but I didn't see any before. Also, this text bubble is a little scratchy and pixelated, but I suppose it's better than nothing.
-Make your panel borders 2-3 pixels thick, not just one.
Just trying to help. I'll be back, don't get frustrated or angry, I just want you to get better.
TrentTheFox at 5:30PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Sorry I haven't been on in a while. I like your new comic too
REDBLAST1 at 10:16AM, Aug. 26, 2007
thanks
SmartSpriter at 8:36AM, Aug. 26, 2007
This has been on the list of "Comics that need Comments" on the front page for a while. I was curious, so I came here, and now I feel really bad. It would seem you have about 30 pages...and nobody's EVER commented on ANY of them? Sorry, I should've came here sooner! However, you cannot completely blame them, for there are reasons I'm sure people didn't come here even after seeing it on that list. Why? Because it's a Smash Bros-like tournament comic. And everybody hates them. A lot. Why? Because not only do they lack story, character development, etc., but they're usually done horribly, and they're very cliche. Everybody's doing them, and none of them are good. That's pretty much your main problem, now... -You're mixing bittages/styles a tiny bit, but not as much as most people so you're doing pretty good. -The effects could use work. -Your matchs end way too quickly, and aren't very detailed. -Your fights lack sound effects, and even the occasional scream or grunt would work too. -Be sure to use text bubbles. You used one on this page, which is good, but I didn't see any before. Also, this text bubble is a little scratchy and pixelated, but I suppose it's better than nothing. -Make your panel borders 2-3 pixels thick, not just one. Just trying to help. I'll be back, don't get frustrated or angry, I just want you to get better.