My neck is killing me!
Dumpling on Nov. 19, 2006
Heres the 2nd page, I hope the writing is better lol I rewrote it all so yeah!
OK so yeah I have to say that the first like 100 pages suck lol the plots suck and the art sucks! but after that it gets WAY better! dont worry! you just have to bare thru the gayness for a while lol
SO GO READ NOW!!
hysellt at 12:13PM, Nov. 20, 2006
I like the way it looks, but the character designs on the last frame make them all look sort of the same, and they all have relatively the same bangs. I'd try to get some color in their somehow, or change up the character design.