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Zage on April 20, 2007
Tell me if have any Tips/Tricks or suggestions. And most of all tell me how you like it
Zage on April 20, 2007
Tell me if have any Tips/Tricks or suggestions. And most of all tell me how you like it
Zage at 6:00PM, April 23, 2007
Meh... I'm working on custom zage sprite :D you'll see them in the future.. and update in 5 seconds
Wes_Nero123 at 5:48PM, April 23, 2007
Gold hegies Pixel art could use a little work. =P Zage is 100% recolor. The guitar effects, yeah that was a little lame. But all that is easy to fix, I mean it is your first comic, I started out recolor too. Just edit Zage from a Sonic sprite instead of recoloring a Manic one. The plot is good so far though.
Quacklin at 5:58PM, April 21, 2007
Hmm, the effects don't match up with the sprites, I suggest you not to do that again, like the gutar thing, lame, try to use a different effect okay, and yes, Natalie would not miss up like that as most people miss use her character and have her as clumsy and dumb, she is smart, clever and will kick ass, so I advice you to try and make her like she is suppose to be, as I know you didn't know this is thats why I'm telling you, also the background is wrong, they go in one side and come out the other, try not to do that ether. You have some spelling mistakes and the fact that the guy with wings is floating is bad, try and make sure they are on the ground.Other than that its okay for a start.
Zage at 2:37PM, April 21, 2007
Sorry Umbreon. That was a joke just for this page -Begins Work on page 2 -SUPER NOVA'S-
Kinuchio at 2:31PM, April 21, 2007
lol its dumb. Just kidding. On the 7th panel, that yellow guy's floating.
Kitty Man at 2:25PM, April 21, 2007
Heh, I laughed when she fell... no offence Umbreon
Umbreon_Queen at 2:15PM, April 21, 2007
Don't put me as dumb though...
KazeFire at 2:15PM, April 21, 2007
Hmmm, make the lines thinner, work on the tails and make sure text dosen't reach the sides. Anyway, really funny, nice comic Zage! FAV and FIVER!
Zage at 2:10PM, April 21, 2007
Ok good xD i get confused some time. Any suggestions
Valavor at 2:09PM, April 21, 2007
funny.
Zage at 2:02PM, April 21, 2007
Lol its dumb Or lol its funny?
Valavor at 1:55PM, April 21, 2007
lol.