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xX Shadolad Xx on Oct. 13, 2008
Master Chiefs love for violence kicks in as he sees a jolly italian plumber…
at 11:10AM, Nov. 2, 2009
Listin to what he say's! he's right. go to the last few pages and look at what i said.
and is that blood?
xX Shadolad Xx
at 11:35PM, Oct. 14, 2008
Ok ill carm down.. Marios bleeding thats why you cant see his eyes that space on the wall is a crudely drawn television and no ive not worked on the plot yet.
at 3:17PM, Oct. 14, 2008
"To much empty space, the words need to fit in the bubbles, what's up with that space on the wall, that blank spaces are to big, and it's quite blurry, save as png.
That pretty much covers the flaws in your comic." - Speed Comics
If you had read this your comic might not suck as much. Usually I have patience for people like you, and try to critisize to help, because I've been spriting for 6 years, but there's no helping you until you chill out. Your comic lacks plot as well, and in panel 2 you can't see Mario's eyes. In 3 you can. Get it right. Plus the reason I haven't posted any comics is because I take time to script out a plot, characters, and such, so my comic is random, and suckish like yours.