This looks suspicious... the speech bubbles have been replaced and and the image saved as .png regardless I shall critique.
Put black lines around your speech bubbles to make them stand out.
As for writing well it's correct and everything... but it's so dull. You need to spice your comic up a little.
My God SONIC AND KNUCKLES CAN FLY! Well at least very minute heights because they aren't touching the ground.
Also you're .jpged to kingdom come which makes your comic look even worse.
The two tone background doesn't help either, and the kidna bad writting is very bad for my brain.
Insane Sov, the word is insane. But yet, he would have to be.
Label this as a sprite comic, please. This is the third comic I've attempted to read tonight, and guess what, they all belong to you and they're all sprite comics. Needless to say, I'm pissed.
rengori at 5:23PM, Oct. 9, 2006
I sure as hell hope this is a joke comic. Even then, they're getting old.
Liaoriao at 2:48PM, Oct. 9, 2006
Hmm. It appears I've lost sight in my left eye, oh well.
Rich at 6:53AM, Oct. 9, 2006
This is sooooo a joke comic.
Shade at 4:09AM, Oct. 9, 2006
This looks suspicious... the speech bubbles have been replaced and and the image saved as .png regardless I shall critique. Put black lines around your speech bubbles to make them stand out. As for writing well it's correct and everything... but it's so dull. You need to spice your comic up a little.
Champtim at 12:36AM, Oct. 9, 2006
OH MY GOD MY EYES!
theduckofanime at 12:24AM, Oct. 9, 2006
My God SONIC AND KNUCKLES CAN FLY! Well at least very minute heights because they aren't touching the ground. Also you're .jpged to kingdom come which makes your comic look even worse. The two tone background doesn't help either, and the kidna bad writting is very bad for my brain.
lefarce at 12:10AM, Oct. 9, 2006
Insane Sov, the word is insane. But yet, he would have to be. Label this as a sprite comic, please. This is the third comic I've attempted to read tonight, and guess what, they all belong to you and they're all sprite comics. Needless to say, I'm pissed.