Part 1: Tails getting owned by mecha sonic, and Rouge gets owned by a CHAO!
Lazy_the_fox on April 14, 2008
Hey guys, I finaily thought of a way to get me into the comic, use a Tails pose and then recolor it! Everyone wins right? Well… Not Tails, he is going to die without sonic so… Sonic can you please help Tails! O_o (Updated: I fixed the clouds and chat bubbles so this webcomic isn't s**t)
Rentorian at 10:01PM, April 15, 2008
Okay... Time for more advice. 1) Super powerful author characters aren't the best way to go but it's your choice. Recolors aren't the best way to go either. 2) The text bubbles still need work, look [url=http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6546/makingbubblessa9.png] here[/url] for a tutorial. 3) Use the rectangle tool to make the panels, have thicker panel borders, and put some space between each panel. 4) You should have tried to use an actual sprite for a sign instead of free handing something. 5) This seems to be several ideas simply jumbled together and thrown into a comic. Try to pu thought into the comic. 6) The joke at the end wasn't very funny, think things though a bit and try to make good jokes. 7) There were several areas in the BG that were still pure white. I also think you should try and use an actual sky BG instead of simply replacing the whit with sky blue. It's kind of eye sting-y. 8) Finally, don't try to upload things to fast and once again, TAKE YOUR TIME. You don't need to rush things. Take it easy and put effort into these.