Must rate..I have to try!!!Some scientist guy:But it could destroy the fabric of time thus ending the paralox which holds our universe..Thus causing our deminsion to collapse.Which could destroy all deminsions.
P.s. Sorry for tripple-post
center in on the action, and I agree with Kxela on everything but the rating, I really think this is below a four, in honesty, I'm not trying to be rude, just honest Needs work, read tony's comic to see a bit more on how to do fight scenes, if you must.
By the way, never use white to seperate panels, always use black.
okkay I understand this is a fight scene...but somehow its lacking substance... Currently its kinda looking slow-motion.
maybe some sound effects..maybe speedlines, heck even more short dialogue like the fourth panel might help spice this page up.
Jak0070 at 4:42PM, Nov. 26, 2006
Must rate..I have to try!!!Some scientist guy:But it could destroy the fabric of time thus ending the paralox which holds our universe..Thus causing our deminsion to collapse.Which could destroy all deminsions. P.s. Sorry for tripple-post
Jak0070 at 7:20PM, Oct. 18, 2006
umm 5 anyone sorry for the double post it doesnt like me...
Jak0070 at 4:34PM, Oct. 11, 2006
forgot to rate
nova ark at 2:47PM, Oct. 7, 2006
very cool hope my quack brawl goes this well
Zero Wite at 4:59PM, Oct. 6, 2006
how hes gonna enter
Zero Wite at 4:59PM, Oct. 6, 2006
yeah but I haven't figured out his appearance
Jak0070 at 8:47AM, Oct. 6, 2006
cool fight scene
The mediocre one at 5:15PM, Oct. 2, 2006
center in on the action, and I agree with Kxela on everything but the rating, I really think this is below a four, in honesty, I'm not trying to be rude, just honest Needs work, read tony's comic to see a bit more on how to do fight scenes, if you must. By the way, never use white to seperate panels, always use black.
Zero Wite at 2:05PM, Sept. 23, 2006
yeah..I couldn't think of anything
Kxela at 1:57PM, Sept. 23, 2006
okkay I understand this is a fight scene...but somehow its lacking substance... Currently its kinda looking slow-motion. maybe some sound effects..maybe speedlines, heck even more short dialogue like the fourth panel might help spice this page up.