Chapter 1: Title
Kei_Kun on Jan. 9, 2006
First page for the title, I like how it turned out (ish). this is Amun, you won't see her for a while, I wonder, can you spot what's wrong with her eyes? It's fine if you can't, but if you can't spot it here you won't see it for a while as she doesn't usually open her eyes.
anonymous at 4:57PM, Feb. 19, 2008
Please resize your pages. Prefer 700 pix max.
rmmanuel at 12:38AM, Feb. 5, 2008
Oooo, I like your pencil work :)
Peipei at 9:31AM, April 23, 2007
interesting :3
Peipei at 9:31AM, April 23, 2007
interesting :3
confusedsoul at 8:23AM, April 23, 2007
As with the previous comment, this page (and the previous) could do with being smaller. Comic readers are notoriously lazy and prefer pages to be a nice accessable size ^_^
thetrickster at 6:52PM, Jan. 9, 2007
Very interesting in how you written the title and chapter in the book she is holding. Though it might help to re-size thr page...?
Darkmax at 12:40PM, Oct. 30, 2006
very nice more