Chapter 1 Page 1
Kiah on Feb. 2, 2008
Here's the new and improved first page. I redid my thumbnails and changed the whole style of the comic to something that I liked more.
I'm kind of throwing the story in peoples' faces, as I don't think long intros with lots of explanation are very natural. I hope it's not too awkward.
Edit: added a little more saturation and brightened the page a bit. Also fixed a few things that were annoying me. Had to delete the pages and re-add them, as DD apparently didn't want to update the image.
Annie2495 at 11:54PM, July 25, 2009
Impressive dialogue!
Elixia_Dragmire at 4:14AM, Jan. 7, 2009
this looks really cool!
Demons_and_Purgatory at 5:02PM, April 1, 2008
This is awesome!! But if I had to be picky about something it's her/his (I'm not sure yet) thumbnail is pointing the wrong direction. It's okay though, I don't expect you to be flawless! I'm rating 5 too!
CoyoteLongshot at 7:32PM, Feb. 10, 2008
Wow... your style is amazing!