roomoo at 9:19PM, Aug. 28, 2010

You have too much white space. Resize the page so barely any white space is shown, also make sure there IS white space around each panel.

evanneo at 10:19AM, Aug. 3, 2010

As everyone said:White space and speech bubbles. And another thing, vary up your panels a bit for a more dynamic comic. For example:The second panel you could show a close-up of Sonic bashing into shadow. Oh and download Paint dot net. For serious.

metabad at 5:53PM, June 11, 2010

You have too much white space. Resize the page so barely any white space is shown, also make sure there IS white space around each panel.

webcomics heh at 1:34PM, July 1, 2009

Looks like somebody gonna get their 8-bit ass kicked.

Nintendude at 6:06PM, Dec. 17, 2007

You have too much white space. Resize the page so barely any white space is shown, also make sure there IS white space around each panel.

Seelinkrun11 at 5:48PM, Dec. 17, 2007

Nice... the only thing I would say is add some bubbles for the text :)