Book Two, page 3

bravo1102 on Nov. 16, 2017

This is pretty much the other side of what Glorianna was agonizing over and was mentioned by Orshia and Armen back on page 80-page 81

Though Thord has trouble with his letters, he actually is good with numbers and musically gifted. He sings of course and plays several instruments. Illya is completely illiterate though she can write her own name.

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Now if I reduced this to line art and then traced and colored it I'd be hailed as a genius and everyone and their brother would comment on it? Sometimes I see something and I want to scream that “the emperor has no clothes”. There are a couple of popular super hero comic that are so badly written it hurts to read them. And yet this flounders around at an apathetic 16 likes and 100 or so page views per update. Quite laughable.

This sucks way more than any of Call me Tom's efforts. If only I could give him my persistence and endurance. This really isn't worth the effort I'm putting into it but I stuck it out for 100 pages.

Please everyone do me a favor and spare me the pep talks and platitudes, I am not fishing for compliments or looking for anyone to tell me to keep it up. I really can't sort out what I want to do with the rest of the script so I just might leave it here until I do.

There are a couple more pages I will post and then I want to concentrate on the rewrite or another project and maybe converting the pictures to line art so this will fool those prejudiced against photography or just me. Yeah, it's me. I just bitch too much. Shut up and let the comic talk, but do that and it's all “yeech, dolls ”