Breaking the fourth wall is amaturish. And having us read a script while looking at a bad rendition of a friggin outhouse is not entertaining.
My advice is to get some backgrounds, and show what is going on.
I think this would be funnier if you put a bit more effort into plot and sprites. actually, maybe making sure the sprites at least appear on the screen might be a good move. And I gotta admit, I don't get this comic at all. Try to avoid 'inside' jokes as the main laugh-getter. You'll want to have a good comic soon though. Sooner or later a TASC'er is going to browse by, and all hell will break loose.
Hype at 11:13AM, Sept. 1, 2006
Plus, you should be able to tell by my Avatar.
Hype at 11:12AM, Sept. 1, 2006
Yeah, but there's one problem with that. I AM AN AMATURE! Why do you you think I'm practicing? Everyone is an amature at some point.
Rich at 6:51PM, Aug. 30, 2006
Breaking the fourth wall is amaturish. And having us read a script while looking at a bad rendition of a friggin outhouse is not entertaining. My advice is to get some backgrounds, and show what is going on.
CutmanSteel at 6:47PM, Aug. 30, 2006
Aww dude. Thats sick. And please, that Bathroom sucks total!
shadowmaster at 5:53PM, Aug. 30, 2006
Oh, and you do know that Roll is Mega's sister, right?
shadowmaster at 5:52PM, Aug. 30, 2006
I think this would be funnier if you put a bit more effort into plot and sprites. actually, maybe making sure the sprites at least appear on the screen might be a good move. And I gotta admit, I don't get this comic at all. Try to avoid 'inside' jokes as the main laugh-getter. You'll want to have a good comic soon though. Sooner or later a TASC'er is going to browse by, and all hell will break loose.