Very nice art and coloration here ^__^ The pose in the last panel looks very nice, aas well as the character designs throughout the archive ^^ (And I wonder what'll happen to poor Toshi-kun next!)
Hey there. :) Your art is actually really good, and the storyline seems interesting so far. But I think your comic could be improved if you made the speech bubbles a little smaller, as well as the size of the text. If you look at some other comics around here, you'll see that they don't really need to be quite so big. :)
Otherwise, nice comic!
DJLink at 11:28PM, June 15, 2010
Update?
bluebug at 4:48PM, Jan. 3, 2007
Love the spikey hair!
Williams_Arts at 7:42PM, Dec. 21, 2006
Thanx for all the comments peole ^_^ !!!!
Williams_Arts at 7:42PM, Dec. 21, 2006
Thanx for all the comments peole ^_^ !!!!
Shippo_no_Neko at 3:41PM, Dec. 21, 2006
Very nice art and coloration here ^__^ The pose in the last panel looks very nice, aas well as the character designs throughout the archive ^^ (And I wonder what'll happen to poor Toshi-kun next!)
ICantRemember at 2:47PM, Dec. 21, 2006
Hey there. :) Your art is actually really good, and the storyline seems interesting so far. But I think your comic could be improved if you made the speech bubbles a little smaller, as well as the size of the text. If you look at some other comics around here, you'll see that they don't really need to be quite so big. :) Otherwise, nice comic!
yoshirider4 at 2:36PM, Dec. 21, 2006
hmm.... this art is pretty good, aswell as the comic, I'll fave it for now I guess. Next time though, spell out by the way.