title page
ZakW on Nov. 16, 2006
Hiya! Sorry I haven't updated lately…. I was up in Portland, I was doing homework, I was playing Wild Arms 3 (PS2), and I haven't been home enough. Sorry! Anyway, heres the title page! Took me sometime to finish. Adobe Photoshop 7.0 is hard to work!
Enjoy!
-zak
ZakW at 3:42PM, Jan. 9, 2007
Hey Will123, Youre avatar... What kind of underwear is Lee wearing? Is it the ones that have the little rockket ships?
will123 at 2:04AM, Dec. 24, 2006
I like the hot people Ten ten, Sakura and Ino and Hinata all the girls rule * screams like Sonic when being chased from Amy*
will123 at 2:02AM, Dec. 24, 2006
you can report champtin and lefarce this is very good and they said sucks...
will123 at 1:59AM, Dec. 24, 2006
Yeah Sakura knows stronger attacks then Sasuke and Naruto example Ki punch
ZakW at 8:15AM, Dec. 20, 2006
ps. NEJI IS THE SECOND COOLEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ZakW at 8:13AM, Dec. 20, 2006
Ok. SASUKE RULES! I LIKE HIM SO MUCH, I PAINTED A LIFE-SIZE PICTURE OF HIM ON MY BEDROOM WALL! Besides, does Naruto or Sakura know most of the teqnuiqes that Sasuke knows? huh?
will123 at 3:23AM, Dec. 13, 2006
show people sakura fights exept for the movies againt Ino, Kakashie or Zaku
ZakW at 7:23AM, Dec. 9, 2006
Ok... then why isnt Naruto your avatar?
will123 at 4:42AM, Dec. 8, 2006
Actually i hate Sasuke
will123 at 3:17AM, Dec. 5, 2006
since i don't know much about then the runners up are Ten Ten , Rock Lee ,Ino, Shino, Temari, Shikamaru, Choji, Kiba and Akamaru, Kankuro, Gaara, I don't like Neji because HE BEAT HINATA :(
will123 at 3:14AM, Dec. 5, 2006
I like Naruto then Hinata then Sakura then Sasuke.
Saryn at 3:56AM, Dec. 4, 2006
your drawing style is really original,I loved the pink thing there,it's so cute
ZakW at 8:04AM, Dec. 3, 2006
Well I have been trying hard lately, and Im not gonna have to good speech bubbles, and you might not see changes next update, but you sure will on the one after! Will123 , I know you must like sakura, but sasukes the best man!
will123 at 6:50AM, Dec. 2, 2006
cool pictures
ZakW at 5:17PM, Dec. 1, 2006
Oh! Lefarce! That torpedo, is really a hoverboard with jet boosters, and that guy you call a kirby is........well, youll have to find out later in the story! By the way, the dragons name is toby! Kaden,the guy on the right, named him, but his twin brother Drake didnt like it, but it was 2-1, that puffball there liked toby so the dragons name became toby! To tell you, Drake is the serios one, but Kaden is kinda goofy, but they both act different every now and then! The pink guy is named,(Okay, Ill tell you,)Choby. Ch-Oe-Bee. He happens to be a citizen of the planet "Midnight"(,Youll find out later,) that is very skilled with magic, and knows Judo.(A fighting style) So theres your explanation!
ZakW at 5:02PM, Dec. 1, 2006
* gives lunamoon_3 a hug :) *
ZakW at 5:01PM, Dec. 1, 2006
Thanks for offering luna, ill figure most of it out, but if i need help ill e-mail you!
lunamoon_3 at 5:25PM, Nov. 20, 2006
Yo! Don't be so harsh! He is a new artist!! I'm gonna help him with photoshop when I can.
ZakW at 5:24PM, Nov. 18, 2006
Well...I guess there are some things I need to improve... Don't worry though, my next page'll be better then this one, I promise you that!
Champtim at 5:19PM, Nov. 18, 2006
I agree with Lefarce.
lefarce at 2:48PM, Nov. 18, 2006
Oh wow. So you see, the paint bucket... yeah... it's not meant to fill areas that aren't solid. Pencil and pen marks don't count in image editing programs. While they may contain color, they aren't vivid enough to properly enclose it. The cover is hectic, to say the least. It seems as if though they are standing on water, or is it the sky? I can't tell since there is a displace cloud which totally obstructs the entire piece. Perhaps it's both, only you have a small concept of depth, shading, etc. In other words, your really bad at coloring, and so, you gave the sky and water the same shade of blue, making them impossible to differentiate. The two human character are, dare I say, the same guy. There is little to no difference in their design. It's as if though they are recolors of one another. And then the random Kirby and missile at the bottom of the page adds to the utter confusion. You may have photoshop, but you clearly have no clue how to use it. Read some tutorials, organise this, and read some other comics to learn how to draw. The anatomy is off... real off. Over all, this is one material. Shoddy, unorganized, and too amateurish. At the age of 10 I drew better then this.