work on your composition. the text is far too small, the pages are filled with dead space for no reason, and there's a giant gap at the end from poor pacing.
there's a lot of other problems, but the layout made it close to unreadable.
Hmm not bad. I love bn!!! So thats why I love it so much.
Though try making the text a bit bigger jst so people can see it. Other then that nice. Oh I love the big battle field. And nice edits by the way. ^.^
You should check out my star force comic as I know you will love it! ^.^
Orin J Master at 8:08AM, Oct. 29, 2009
work on your composition. the text is far too small, the pages are filled with dead space for no reason, and there's a giant gap at the end from poor pacing. there's a lot of other problems, but the layout made it close to unreadable.
anonymous at 6:34PM, Nov. 29, 2008
Who is this... Exlasses guy?
Ketiou at 3:11PM, June 14, 2008
Hmm not bad. I love bn!!! So thats why I love it so much. Though try making the text a bit bigger jst so people can see it. Other then that nice. Oh I love the big battle field. And nice edits by the way. ^.^ You should check out my star force comic as I know you will love it! ^.^