Chapter 2 -- Page 6
darrell on Feb. 11, 2013
I was having second thoughts about including this gag (the jumping up and down) as it takes up a good chunk of a page and this story was already dragging on a bit but I just figured why not throw in at least a little bit of humour.
I'm currently drawing up a “cover” page to part 2 of chapter 2. I know I said I wasn't going to do them and I'm still having my doubts. They always seem to take longer than they should.
Locoma - Yep, it is the Bluenoser. And now we get to see the first meeting of Victoria and Bluenoser. I had a feeling that reactions to Victoria's backstory would vary but I figured why not just tell it and let the reader decide how they feel about it. So I'm looking forward to seeing what you think along the way.
shastab24 - He's not a nice guy. And it may get worse before it gets better (not that I actually see it getting any better).
Peipei and ghostrunner - Thanks!
I am Candyman at 6:14AM, March 14, 2013
At first I wasn't sure why he was jumping- then I realized he couldn't fly! LOL
Locoma at 9:13AM, Feb. 12, 2013
I second what shastab24 said, really funny gag. Well her backstory definitely is a conflicted one, which promises to be really interesting. I'm just glad Bluenoser showed up, that can't be a bad sign
Peipei at 7:39AM, Feb. 12, 2013
Very interesting turn in the story :3
ghostrunner at 3:45AM, Feb. 12, 2013
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shastab24 at 7:35PM, Feb. 11, 2013
I like the gag. It's fun, and definitely delineates that Bluenoser can't fly.