Page 4: Meet the Author
Eternal_Gwen on March 13, 2007
No not me, for those of you who are wondering. The Author is the girl. And she's only glowing because you're seeing it through Mr. Main character's eyes.
A page of many expressions and few full-bodies; my cup of tea. >.> Yes, I know I was a bit extravagant on the backgrounds, I was experimenting.
I'm going to be coloring eyes from now on, I love doing it too much to really stick to grey scale. So I've updated all the eyes on the previous pages.
On a tangent, Happy Pi Day! Now to answer some reviews!
theorah: Thank you for the Fav! It's my first! It's also very flattering.
rana: Yes, Bad main Character! Bad boy! Bad, bad, bad! No Peeping!
SomaX: I tone? Oh, right… Of course I know how to tone… >.>
Azaeziel at 3:35PM, March 29, 2007
I like the eyes. very nice.
Rubygem at 3:39PM, March 14, 2007
yes yes it is
theorah at 3:33PM, March 14, 2007
Nice page composition, your experimentation in BG is good, for all the BGs used here mix with the emotions of the cvharacters :) Still, remember to put in a surrounding BG on atleast every other page, otherwise it will be hard for us readers to really get a sense of reality for the characters, if they are constantly behind patternesque BGs, it makes it harder to beleive in the characters and the world they live in ^^ Great page though, keep up the good work! :)
SomaX at 1:53PM, March 14, 2007
And another great update!