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Speedball on May 16, 2011
Quick rough up now, working on the final version even as I type this, so it shouldn't be too long. It's kind of hard to depict “tearing energy out of your own chest” so I hope I did alright…
at 12:20AM, May 20, 2011
Let us see how this goes... It says someone dies, sorta, but... death is so often a metaphorical thing.
at 11:40AM, May 18, 2011
Hehe, looks like she's not the same Tanicia that got stuck in the tree.
at 2:30PM, May 17, 2011
Thrilling until the last page :-o
at 6:12AM, May 17, 2011
Damn.. must be painfull like hell. more respect for Tanica!
at 4:22AM, May 17, 2011
Ohh, so THAT's what happened. That explains some things.
...why didn't you end the chapter after the death of Smith? No matter the outcome for Tanica, this could easily be it's own chapter. It's 10 pages into it already, after all.
Of course, if Tanica dies before they get to "operate", or if something else happens that stops the chapter about now, then that's a different story.