Thank you so much for the comments trevor! They mean the world to making this book better!
As for the bubbles we tried to use solid bubbles but it takes away from the overall details of the pages. Jason crams a lot of details in each panel. I would hate to lose that detail, because I think it brings so much life to the world. But maybe we should look into bumping the opaque back up a few percent. Right now we are sitting at 80% opaqueness..
As always, I love your artwork. The pencil lines are refined enough to not need inks, but sketchy enough to have that "down-to-earth" look and feel.
I'm still not sure how I feel about the opaque balloons...I'd like to see them filled in a bit. Also, you may be able to shrink your font size if you wanted to.
Overall though, another stunning page!
mattwandcow at 3:10PM, March 17, 2008
The fly is a nice touch
Hdub7 at 12:38AM, Nov. 16, 2007
This is a great page too. Especialy the perspective of the buildings in the top panel.
EmeraldCity at 4:51PM, Oct. 15, 2007
Thank you so much for the comments trevor! They mean the world to making this book better! As for the bubbles we tried to use solid bubbles but it takes away from the overall details of the pages. Jason crams a lot of details in each panel. I would hate to lose that detail, because I think it brings so much life to the world. But maybe we should look into bumping the opaque back up a few percent. Right now we are sitting at 80% opaqueness..
trevoramueller at 7:54AM, Oct. 15, 2007
As always, I love your artwork. The pencil lines are refined enough to not need inks, but sketchy enough to have that "down-to-earth" look and feel. I'm still not sure how I feel about the opaque balloons...I'd like to see them filled in a bit. Also, you may be able to shrink your font size if you wanted to. Overall though, another stunning page!