Read a few pages ahead. Excellent art and interesting setup, but the narration really could stand to be toned down. With a comic, you've got the advantage of showing rather than having to describe everything with words, and the redundancy of events in both text and visuals is only distracting. Narration works better to clarify things not apparent from the visuals. Being sparing with it gives the words far more impact.
dude I had to read to the next page and next page before commenting
I usually come across web comics and say nice story or nice art but your comic goes well beyond that
It has both plus creativity and great composition ..
This I have to say is the best web comic out there and if there is any comic better than yours I cant find it! rate:5+
I don't even need to read another page to tell that this is already fav worthy.
I'll have to read this when I get a bit more time. >w>
Beautiful artwork!!!
MeHighLow at 6:50PM, Sept. 19, 2009
Excellent, if somewhat dense, opening page.
Streetknight at 2:41AM, June 8, 2009
nice! very intresting.
jlt314 at 9:43AM, June 6, 2009
awesome art, has something in common with the Gunnerkrig Court
Kaja Rainbow at 8:57AM, June 5, 2009
Read a few pages ahead. Excellent art and interesting setup, but the narration really could stand to be toned down. With a comic, you've got the advantage of showing rather than having to describe everything with words, and the redundancy of events in both text and visuals is only distracting. Narration works better to clarify things not apparent from the visuals. Being sparing with it gives the words far more impact.
Karm2865 at 8:41AM, May 30, 2009
+2 way cool
Graphictruth at 10:30AM, May 29, 2009
Incredible hook.
harkovast at 5:19AM, May 29, 2009
Cool opening, awesome art!
Ryan_Scott at 4:36PM, May 28, 2009
WOW
Almost Famous at 7:11AM, May 28, 2009
dude I had to read to the next page and next page before commenting I usually come across web comics and say nice story or nice art but your comic goes well beyond that It has both plus creativity and great composition .. This I have to say is the best web comic out there and if there is any comic better than yours I cant find it! rate:5+
Loud_G at 3:42AM, May 15, 2009
This is absolutely GORGEOUS!
theends at 4:28AM, April 23, 2009
Thanks!
Kahea at 8:48PM, April 21, 2009
I don't even need to read another page to tell that this is already fav worthy. I'll have to read this when I get a bit more time. >w> Beautiful artwork!!!
polo at 7:36AM, March 12, 2009
Beautiful page!