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Avart on June 18, 2017
Yeah, Hayate was sneaking around Hitomi's house… All of you guessed it right! Hahaha I don't know whether to be happy or sad because this is so predictable :D
Anyway, what is what he wants this time? Maybe he just want to borrow a book of poems from Hitomi.
I can only hope that this won't follow the same course as Twilight… this is more like a Romeo + Juliet modern version (a vampiric one).
Again, I've added a page on my Extras, just click the image at the left :D
Good to see you all!
KAM at 6:31AM, June 21, 2017
:-)
TuSense at 10:23PM, June 20, 2017
Dope shading.
thunderdavid at 6:01AM, June 20, 2017
Wait, isn't there a rule about vamps can't enter your home unless you invite them? Sorry, that was from True Blood, wrong vamps. :)
Avart at 6:36PM, June 20, 2017
You're right, but that happens on page 31, when she says "Don't stay there or someone will see you", so basically she invited him :D I didn't follow this rule on Page 4 of the Extra Chapter to make it funny and because it's a Spin Off without rules (or at least, not the same rules as the main story) Thanks for comment! :D
Jason Moon at 8:19AM, June 19, 2017
Hayate is soooo cool!!
Avart at 12:28AM, June 20, 2017
Thanks Jason, I'm glad you like it :D
KimLuster at 7:23PM, June 18, 2017
Haha, I know what you mean about predictability!! On one hand I like it when readers are completely surprised when the next page comes, but on the other hand there's a feeling of satisfaction and that your comic is being understood when they're able to guess what's coming. I guess I want either possibility (surprise or prediction) to about 50%... Anyway, great page!! Now that Hitomi is all aroused (from Kokoro) I wonder what's gonna happen here!!
Avart at 12:27AM, June 20, 2017
Thank you Kim, and you're right! It's not that bad at all, but I need to maintain a balance on this subject :D And yes, Hitomi is all aroused and lately she's been acting a little impulsive so, anything could happen!
GuyWithChainsaw at 7:56AM, June 18, 2017
Man, I love everything about the left side of this page. Hayate's awesome jump pose, and then my favorite, Eyes full of tension and mystery. You really know how to translate character's feeling through their eyes. Nicely done!
Avart at 12:19AM, June 20, 2017
Thank you again! Drawing eyes is a very important thing to me, and I'm always trying to learn new ways to do it :D
Call Me Tom at 4:34AM, June 18, 2017
Fav+
Avart at 12:16AM, June 20, 2017
Thanks!