Thanks Guys :) @Cres0055: I was not really thinking of the first 3 panels as necessarily directly following each other, but rather just different scenes as she's racing thru the buildig. In my mind's eye, I pictured the 3rd panel as her making the leap after running some distance - but yes, she is horizontal to the floor and really did jump a whole flight - the power of dreams :)
Wait seriously she jumped a whole flight. I like your choice of page design. You have the first 4 panels showing some running then end with the last 3 panels narrowing in on the locker room. I think it turned out really well. Also is the 2nd showing her horizontal with the floor?...Wait I think I get it she is running up the stairs and grabs the rail on her way up and swings up a flight right?
@plymayer: I like to think she slowed a bit when passing those people in the hall; @Peipei: Yes, I was worried about that too, but luckily my efforts to keep this teen-rated kept it from slipping :)
skyangel at 3:37PM, Nov. 4, 2014
Love those action poses!!
KimLuster at 5:41AM, Jan. 30, 2013
Thanks Guys :) @Cres0055: I was not really thinking of the first 3 panels as necessarily directly following each other, but rather just different scenes as she's racing thru the buildig. In my mind's eye, I pictured the 3rd panel as her making the leap after running some distance - but yes, she is horizontal to the floor and really did jump a whole flight - the power of dreams :)
cres0055 at 10:42PM, Jan. 29, 2013
Wait seriously she jumped a whole flight. I like your choice of page design. You have the first 4 panels showing some running then end with the last 3 panels narrowing in on the locker room. I think it turned out really well. Also is the 2nd showing her horizontal with the floor?...Wait I think I get it she is running up the stairs and grabs the rail on her way up and swings up a flight right?
PaulEberhardt at 8:01PM, Jan. 29, 2013
Great action-laden page!
KimLuster at 12:47PM, Jan. 29, 2013
Thanks Plymayer - my little attempt to accentuate action :)
plymayer at 11:53AM, Jan. 29, 2013
Love the panel arrangement/page layout by the way.
KimLuster at 11:26AM, Jan. 29, 2013
just had it pointed out to me that exercise is spelled with an 's' not a 'z' (see 3rd panel)... Grrr. Probably correct it this evening :)
KimLuster at 5:50AM, Jan. 29, 2013
@plymayer: I like to think she slowed a bit when passing those people in the hall; @Peipei: Yes, I was worried about that too, but luckily my efforts to keep this teen-rated kept it from slipping :)
Peipei at 3:12AM, Jan. 29, 2013
Ugh how embarrassing! I hope she doesn't lose her towel in the process xD. I know this is a dream but still...:S
plymayer at 10:51PM, Jan. 28, 2013
She's moving so fast I can feel the wind kicking up as she goes bye.