KimLuster at 4:17AM, March 6, 2013

It's true - they always scream... at least every time I've tried this they did *snort* :)

Peipei at 8:21PM, March 5, 2013

Oh wow! I wasn't expecting that at all xD. Yeah, this lady is better off keeping her mouth shut right now :s. Lady needs to stop screaming.

jgib99 at 6:11PM, March 5, 2013

Ugh, why do they always scream!? Great work!!

KimLuster at 9:04AM, March 4, 2013

Thanks a lot, cres0055 - I appreciate your detailed critiques :) I can see how the order of the panels could be confusing now (didn't see it at time of creation). I meant for the smaller panel at the top (the screaming one!) to be the second in order and the top right panel to be 3rd. . Yeah, as for breaking rules, I think Kimber Lee's experiencing a bit of the corrupting influence of great power, along with treating dream people as unreal. I'm personally curious about ethical behavior in dreams. Do dream actions reflect your true character, or not? Exploring such is far from over...

cres0055 at 8:32AM, March 4, 2013

Great page, also I like how the 1st panel turned out. Interesting so she is breaking all the rules, not that beating up a bunch of people that she knew would have been any worse than what she is doing now. Great detail on this page, I like the darker contrast on this page I feel like it makes the detail sharper. I like how panels 1 and 3 turned out(the big top 2 panels I am not entirely sure on the order of events on those panels and the detail on the whole page just seems really crisp.)

KimLuster at 4:59AM, March 4, 2013

Thanks Plymayer :)

plymayer at 4:36AM, March 4, 2013

The surprised look on her face in panel one is fantastic.