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KimLuster on Feb. 21, 2013
Mmmkay… Kimber Lee isn't supposed to get hurt in dreams… Oops! This is the last page of chapter three. Next chapter I be moving further into what's really happening inside Kimber's dreams (oops I guess I just revealed she doesn't really die :). I hope I don't get too confusing with everything - but Kimber Lee herself doesn't even fully know what's happening.
Thanks for reading :)
AmeliaP at 3:58PM, Oct. 16, 2018
so far so good! I noticed you keep the essence of the story in the current series Godstrands. It's great! Many authors destroy the previous series to do something different, changing characters, etc. But you keep the essence intact. It's so cool!
AmeliaP at 7:26PM, Oct. 22, 2018
Digital? But it's good to see the transition from "analogical" to digital. (Wise decision going with a paper first).
KimLuster at 4:55AM, Oct. 17, 2018
I read all the comments you've made! Wow! Thank you! Now if only I had all the time in the world to redo this thing in digital!! :D
KimLuster at 5:20AM, March 25, 2013
@cres0055: I saw where you commented on the last few pages; thanks dude :) I know stories must have internal consistency, but even Kimber Lee herself questions why dream injuries often seem to cause her pain inconsistently (back in the teen pages she fell several stories from a building and got away unscathed, then she punched a car window, wondered if she broke her hand, and brooded over why the differences...). Anyhow, I have some eye-openers (sorta) in that area coming. @plymayer: yah you could say that :)
plymayer at 9:53PM, March 24, 2013
Could be in trouble now.
cres0055 at 9:20PM, March 24, 2013
Well you made it clear that she does get hurt but the hurt doesn't sustain injury or something. Or else getting up when she fell would more be just her popping up and not her slowly raising to her feet. But here I presume would be the first time she sustained injury. (Yeah I know semantics on word choice and all but you did put the effort into the story to say yeah she does get phased to some degree when getting hurt and all.) Although I think this is the only time when she really reacts to getting hurt since all the other times she gets up without a scratch. Anyways... Great page. I like this choice of ending since I really didn't think she could sustain injury in a dream. Also I like the expression of hers in the 4th panel.
KimLuster at 6:52PM, March 24, 2013
Yeah, Banes, me too - and they're very disturbing...
Banes at 6:45PM, March 24, 2013
Whoa...this is heavy...I've had dreams like that, Kim...wayyyyy disturbing.
KimLuster at 5:49PM, March 24, 2013
Haha, well like it has for many others, the Matrix provided some inspiration for this story ;)
Peipei at 5:42PM, March 24, 2013
Oh shit...I was gonna say, I hope this isn't like the matrix where you can die in your sleep x.x...Thank goodness for dreams!