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KimLuster on Feb. 21, 2013
So I'm about eight pages ahead, and I've been experimenting with various watercolor techniques that so-called ‘experts’ talk about. Some are decent - some could probably handle a good ‘do-over’ (which I'm not gonna do), so… bear with me thru my experimentations (and feel free to chime in with advice - I'll try anything :). Thanks for reading everyone!
AmeliaP at 12:35PM, Oct. 31, 2018
I don't know what's worse situation, when she's awake or dreaming o__O
skyangel at 4:05PM, Nov. 12, 2014
Ohhh this looks very official! Really love the scenery and buildings in the third panel!
irrevenant at 6:22PM, July 19, 2013
Demmit Kimber, put two and two together already. -_-
Banes at 11:25AM, April 23, 2013
Rockin' house! And a true horror of a dream, to be completely immobilized. But as her "Double-o-zero" comment shows, our girl is still feisty as all get out!
IRogue at 9:50AM, April 11, 2013
Thank you for taking a look at my webcomic! I'm looking forward to reading more of yours, as well! :)
KimLuster at 3:08PM, April 10, 2013
@Paul: All the archvillains I've ever met lived in places like this so it'd be my first impression too *snicker*; @Peipei: You mean you don't want this story to be like a Shakespearean tragedy with things going wrong for the protagonist and end sadly? Me neither... ;)
Peipei at 1:54PM, April 10, 2013
This dream sucks so far for her x.x...She gets to sit strapped in a chair and wheeled around by guys with big guns x.x. I hope there will be a plot twist in her favor soon :3.
PaulEberhardt at 11:11AM, April 10, 2013
Hmmm... a classic archvillain's residence, that would be my first impression. But judging from first impressions is not always a good idea; I wonder why so many people still do it. :)
KimLuster at 9:35AM, April 10, 2013
Dream Big! :)
plymayer at 8:52PM, April 9, 2013
Big house, big basement, big trouble.
KimLuster at 4:45PM, April 9, 2013
This page may illustrate what I was saying a bit more. Kimber Lee cannot see outside the truck, but due to her super senses she sorta knows she is in a hilly wooded area and near a big house - and that fact is a lot clearer to us readers... And the fact I have to explain stuff in the comment section means I need to get tighter with the dang story :))
KimLuster at 4:34PM, April 9, 2013
Thanks cres0055 :) I can see that I maybe made things too vague and confusing. The page prior to this one she mentioned 'hearing voices' and at once point her eyes were open while being in the op. room, so I intended that to mean she had at least a vague awareness of all the doctors, and thus they could all still be a part of her dream. My intention was the she basically knew what happened, but that her recollection is a lot fuzzier than what we see (us viewing from the 'God's Eye' point of view and all...) Yeah, my storytelling skills could use a bit more practice too haha
cres0055 at 4:08PM, April 9, 2013
Well,great page. I like the big overlook in the 3rd panel. Hmm...interesting. I gather that they are going to treat her like some experiment. I like how you did her unease in the second panel. ALso going back to a comment I think 2 pages ago...what was throwing me off was that things happened in her dream with out her being aware of their happening, I kind of assumed that this meant they were back in the real world, but it seems not.