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KimLuster on Aug. 25, 2014
I thought panel three would look dramatic, but my ‘proofreader’ asked, “What's she doing? Having a baby or taking a dump?”… Grrrr…! Sometimes you just gotta laugh… haha! Grrrr…
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Might be a bit later on a couple future pages as I work on DD presentation page.
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Thanks for Reading Everyone!
skyangel at 5:50PM, Feb. 12, 2015
That's an interesting postion to feel God in! I was almost expecting her to give birth.
KimLuster at 8:36PM, Aug. 26, 2014
@Peipei: Yeah, I don't think 'anyone' will be the same after all this - if there is an 'after all this'...!
Peipei at 7:31PM, Aug. 26, 2014
Those poor kids, I hope this entire event doesn't scar the kids for life...She's just doing what she has to do.
KimLuster at 12:34PM, Aug. 25, 2014
@Call Me Tom: Dangit! Well there goes my chance at 'Best Protagonist'! ;)
Call Me Tom at 11:10AM, Aug. 25, 2014
I don't think Kimber lee's there any more!
KimLuster at 7:59AM, Aug. 25, 2014
@bravo: Yeah, I think you're right. I may try to see if I can crop and redo it. The image I have in my head looks great and dramatic, but as is, panel 3 almost looks like a lame attempt at fanservice. And... who is it? It may be that questioned is never answered directly... But, I think in the next few dozen pages it can become much, much clearer!
bravo1102 at 7:37AM, Aug. 25, 2014
In panel three you should've bumped the art down to show the top of her head and not somehow focused on her crotch squat. "I'm the one saving you." Is it Kimber Lee or the little thing? Or maybe she's now a combination of the two and no longer either. Momma may not be the person she was Dyson. Events like this can bring on some serious changes.
KimLuster at 5:34AM, Aug. 25, 2014
@Banes: Thanks! Yeah, Emilio is probably... well I really do talk too much!
KimLuster at 5:32AM, Aug. 25, 2014
@plymayer: lol well I do divulge too much!
Banes at 5:15AM, Aug. 25, 2014
Wow! Love this drama! And the pain on Emilio's face in the last panel! P.S...I would not want to be one of those soldiers right now...
plymayer at 5:11AM, Aug. 25, 2014
An noble sacrifice? Don't think so. She/it is going to extract some revenge.
plymayer at 5:10AM, Aug. 25, 2014
Panel three looked fine to me UNTIL you pointed those choices out. LOL.