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KimLuster on Feb. 25, 2015
To find out that one of your kids had been molested - right up under your nose….
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Just a few pages left in the Chapter. We've been relatively languid with the pacing - don't count of it to last!
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Thanks for reading everyone!
KimLuster at 5:12AM, March 1, 2015
@skyangel: Ha, have you been reading my story note ideas...?! lol Yeah, and could it be that Socorro's current state is based on Kimber Lee's perception of her as well...? Dumdumdum...! We'll find out their ultimate plans eventually - and if they have backup plans... ;)
KimLuster at 5:07AM, March 1, 2015
@Banes: Thank You!! We will see Socorro again... someday!
skyangel at 2:18AM, March 1, 2015
I'm not sure if I would feel super excited or totally floored to find I had her super powers as they are both very fun but scary too. Interesting that the two who developed to be like Kim had her own personal input as a kickstarter. Maybe the key to utilising such an army would be that she would be a kind of controlling queen bee contained in a very secure environment. That's a very dark future for her if it was to be, although I always feel the MIB vastly underestimate her power! As Peipei says too, great emotional content on this page and so much to think about. I'm intrigued to know what's going on outside!!
Banes at 10:14PM, Feb. 28, 2015
I've been wondering about Soccorro and the old man too...good to see that old dude again. Great character. Poor crying Dyson was heart wrenching on the last page, but this is much heavier! I love all the various povs here!
KimLuster at 12:09PM, Feb. 28, 2015
@peipei: well... we'll learn socorro's fate eventually. She's still alive I'll say that much!
Peipei at 10:08AM, Feb. 28, 2015
This page is filled with so much emotion! I feel bad for Kim, she was only looking out for Soccoro's best interests. Would her folks have rathered that she died instead of being infected with the strain? That's probably a really hard question to answer but I honestly would just be happy she's alive, messed up or not :s.
KimLuster at 5:21AM, Feb. 28, 2015
@ghosty: true that!
ghostrunner at 1:43AM, Feb. 28, 2015
well knowing is half the battle
KimLuster at 4:25AM, Feb. 27, 2015
@Plymayer: Thanks!
plymayer at 10:09PM, Feb. 26, 2015
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KimLuster at 9:47AM, Feb. 26, 2015
@tupapayon: Yup, and being the big believer in Freewill that I am, breaking the cycle starts with one's self!! Not saying it's easy - sometimes doing the right thing is the hardest thing in the world... but it's still ultimately up to the individual! As for what's happening outside... check back in about 5 days!
tupapayon at 9:18AM, Feb. 26, 2015
Sexual abuse leaves deep scars… I've known some abusers that were abused themselves as children… that's a cycle that needs to be broken… and what's happening out there?…
KimLuster at 8:25AM, Feb. 26, 2015
@Bravo: I agree... I have some strict rules when it comes to young girls and men (not their father) being alone for long periods... Yes, I'm profiling and I know there are exceptions to every angle... sorry, don't care! As for your idea about tank guns... Maybe what's coming soon will suffice! ;)
KimLuster at 8:18AM, Feb. 26, 2015
@Barry: Yeah, this story was originally supposed to be a comedy ;)
bravo1102 at 7:58AM, Feb. 26, 2015
I'm sorry doesn't cut it mom. Why didn't you pay closer attention? It's against the law in NJ for staff in a school NOT to report on suspicions of child abuse. And are they finally gonna bring Eli out to the tank gunnery range? A 120 mm SABOT enema would do him some good. Probably take the top of his head clean off, but hey, all for advance of science.
BarryCorbett at 7:43AM, Feb. 26, 2015
Wow, things weren't bad enough!